Charlie and the Chocolate Factory book review by Emily

Charlie and the Chocolate Factory by Roald Dahl
Reviewed by Emily

Description:
This book is about a boy who has a poor family.Charlie Bucket he loves chocolate but he only gets one chocolate bar a year for his birthday present.Every day he would walk to school he would go early and as he would go past Willy Wonka’s factory he would start to go slower and slower he would take slow deep breaths of chocolate and gloop them down. Mr Bucket came in with the newspaper he read it out - I Willy Wonka have put a golden ticket in 5 chocolate bars to 5 just 5 lucky children will get to come in to my factory. Will Charlie Bucket get a golden ticket?
Opinion:
I think this book is really cool because you can nearly taste the chocolate in your mouth. I think lots of people would like this even adults will like it.
You can guess what happens next.
Rating:
5 out of 5

'Time Out' by Emily

Zoe slapped me. I slapped her back. When I looked up mum was looking angry at me and put me in time out. I tried  to explain that Zoe had slapped me  but she did not listen.I felt annoyed and angry at her. I started crying.It was not fair? Why won't they listen to me? I want to get out of here. Finally I got out of time out and got to explain more and it all ended out happily.