Fight Brewing by Amber

Some kid was swinging his leg back and forward behind one of my friends. What’s he doing? Suddenly it popped into my mind. He’s going to kick her. When he was still doing it, two of my friends and I shouted “Ishani! Look behind you!”
“What?” she replied. I can’t believe it. She didn’t even notice him.

Then she finally turned around and saw it. So, just in the nick of time, she jumped away. I smell a fight coming, and that’s really bad. Luckily the teacher came just in time and stop what was going to happen. Maybe some other time I’ll have that fight.

Lost by Kali

Wheres my mum I can’t see her. Where are you I panicked. I yelled again MUMMY. I still couldn't see  her anywhere , I started to sulk, it felt like she had passed away.
I screamed hollering MUMMY,  I slowly sat down bursting with tears saying, wheres my mummy. I miss you already.

I heard foot steps. Suddenly someone appeared in front of me. I looked up it was my mum. I thought you were dead., I rushed up to her. I thought I lost you, I hugged her tight. I love you mummy.

Charlie and the Chocolate Factory book review by Emily

Charlie and the Chocolate Factory by Roald Dahl
Reviewed by Emily

Description:
This book is about a boy who has a poor family.Charlie Bucket he loves chocolate but he only gets one chocolate bar a year for his birthday present.Every day he would walk to school he would go early and as he would go past Willy Wonka’s factory he would start to go slower and slower he would take slow deep breaths of chocolate and gloop them down. Mr Bucket came in with the newspaper he read it out - I Willy Wonka have put a golden ticket in 5 chocolate bars to 5 just 5 lucky children will get to come in to my factory. Will Charlie Bucket get a golden ticket?
Opinion:
I think this book is really cool because you can nearly taste the chocolate in your mouth. I think lots of people would like this even adults will like it.
You can guess what happens next.
Rating:
5 out of 5

'The Crash' by Anaiya

I was riding my cousins  bike so fast that I could hardly see anything that was going past.
When I turned on the corner I could see a lady and man right in front of me. From the  moment I saw them I knew I was going to crash and in about 5 seconds started to shout “look out, look out!’ Unfortunately a truck was going past at that very moment so they could not hear anything I had said. I realised I could still turn into a corner but I was going to fast to even turn or brake. I crashed into her at that moment. My brakes and my front wheel went straight into her backside. I flew into the air and landed on the concrete and grazed my leg quite badly. She shouted in soooo much pain and started to yell at  me and said stuff like “ look out where you're going, Keep your eyes on the road!”
She limped over to a random doorstep and I thought she had sprained her ankle by the way she kept rubbing it and she could not walk properly either.
I felt guilty because I hit her but I also felt annoyed that I tried to avoid it but I still hit her.

'My Writing Score' by Caitlin C

The principal said in his big, booming voice, “Caitlin!”. I feel my skin dripping with sweat, my knees wobbling uncontrollably as I slowly stand up. I gulp and lumber towards the stage. The hall is utterly silent, apart from a few whispery murmurs.  My stomach feels as if it will float away in happiness. I force my head to glance back at the school. I can’t help the rush of satisfaction flow through my body as I reach the stage.

“Congratulations!” says the principal, as he shakes my hand warmly. He hands over my certificate. This is it. I’m not going to let the dim light and musty smell of the hall ruin this. I’m about to snatch it but slow my hand down just in time. The blue paper on the front of the certificate feels stiff and textured. I finally have it.

I grin and turn around. Silence. One or two claps. A roar of applause!!

'My Scooter Injury' by Sharvi

I went down a big rocky hill and with lots of speed and suddenly BUMP! my scooter had gone over a big rocky bump and I tumbled of my scooter to the right, hurt my arm really bad. My arm bent and I felt lots of pain. I also scraped my knees and out came heaps of blood and it was a huge scrape!

Then I started crying and crying. My neibours  were with me wondering what to do and my sister was with me to and she  got so worried she went to go get my dad. When my dad came he said “What happened?” and so we all told my dad what happened. While we were all telling my dad what happened, I was saying in my head “What if I had broke or sprained my arm?” Then I got a bit scared. I was still crying and I cried non stop. I was in so much pain.

My dad was helping me up and so were my neibours and my sister. we went inside my house but as soon as we got to the doorstep, I had to sit down on the doorstep to rest because I was in so much pain.As soon as I got inside, my grandma and mum asked “What happened?” and since I was in so much pain, my neibours and my sister and dad told them what happened.

As soon as they heard what had happened, then we went into the living room and we put special cream on my knee and put something called balm on my arm. The next morning I was still in pain so we put balm on my arm and put a bandage around my arm.  It took days for me to recover but in a few weeks I was ship and shape.

I wish I never did that but I know I won’t do it again.
I still have a little bit of pain in my veins. P.S Don’t do this it’s worse than you think!

'Scooter' by Megan

I suddenly realised that my scooter was tipping forwards.
I thought to myself that I don’t have ANY  control over the scooter.
The wind was blowing through my hair I got a shiver then I was about to fall, but I was going to fast to stop,

BAM the next thing I knew was that I  was on the ground and crying.
My hands were facing the underway up and the top was facing the bottom. My arms and body was too weak to get my arms up I was having different emotions but the word I could choose would be AGONY.

My dad just picked me up and dusted me off and put me in his car (we were going to get our citizenship when I was hurt my mum told him that we weren't allowed to be late)
We were going to my mums work and my mum  saw my hands and she saw 1 brooze she put a bandage on my hand and I said “But, this one hurts to” she saw another brooze and she said “ we ARE  going to the hospital but we are first going to the citizenship”

We went there and then we sat for a loooooooooong time till our meeting.
We finally got called up and then I was sooooooo quiet that my mum knew that something was Wrong with her daughter

She said to the Citizenship guy “we are going to leave and I am going to take my daughter to the hospital”

We went to the Adelaide Emergency Clinic and got an X-RAY.
We went to a patient's room and we waited for about 15 mins and I was in a pain but we got the news.
The doctor said “you have 2 broken wrists”
I was freaking out because that was the first time I broke ANYTHING.......................ANYTHING
My mum told me to calm down all these thoughts came through my head.
I called my dad and told him the news he thought I was lying...............................I told him that was the truth but he still would not BELIEVE me.

7 weeks later:
I was out of my cast and running around and playing with my friends I got to tell you to get the casts of it is not a walk in a park.
So if you ever break BOTH of your arms......good luck!