Tuesday, August 14, 2012

The Big Wave by Emma D

I heard a crackling noise coming over me. I looked behind me and it was an enormous wave .Three seconds later I was really far down in the sea that it was pitch black. I felt the seaweed and the coral brushing against my body. I was almost out of breath. I had to push against the current to get to the top of the water. I was miles away from the shore. How will I get back. It must at least take two or three days to get back.Then my cousins saw because I had my pink togs on (thank you togs). One of the older boys carried me back to the shore. My mum was very worried because she could not see me anywhere.Then I went up to her and she hugged me till I said “never stop”.

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